Wednesday 9 October 2013

Minute Poetry: Laughter

Laughter is a gloroius sound
A soft snicker
A loud cackle
Hysterical
 
 
The sound of different emotions
Melodic tune
Laughing so hard
You can not breathe

Being held back by a big smile
Tears in your eyes
A rumbling
A joyous sound

1 comment:

  1. Beautiful, dramatic, variation of pace and emotion. Well controlled. Stunning second line featuring the alliteration of "s". The use of "minute" - 2 meanings - is a strength. Both meanings work. Well done.

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